Saturday, November 12, 2011

[Eden v2] Prologue: It all begins on that day —young man—

Alright, time to resume Hyouketsu Kyoukai.

"The time now is 24 hour and 00 minutes."

"Beginning special training of mock scenario #03."

"Confirming the location of enemies via far-sight, they are approaching us...... Here they come!"

I shouted towards the three guards in my team.

The place I was pointing to was the dense forest no more than ten meters in front of us. At the same time, I could feel a spine-chilling nervousness that was spreading throughout the team.

...... My lips felt so dry.

...... No, I must concentrate.

All of my three teammates lifted their weapons - great sword, broadsword, and heavy firearms. I clutched my chest tightly

My weapon is something that belongs only to me, and is different from the rest of the three. It is the arts of shinryoku of an apprentice-Priestess.

The next instance.

A dark purple mist erupted from within the dense forest.

"It's a Yuugenshu!"

I had no idea who shouted that.

The mist 'object' appeared from within the forest next, as though to answer the call of my teammate.

The mist was pulsating like a living thing. Its four limbs and head were hidden in the mist, and one could only see a pair of ruby-like eyes shining brightly.

Yuugenshu — an unknown existence came here after bypassing the barriers of the Priestesses. They originated from the Garden of Corrupted Song <Eden>, which is located ten thousand meters below the floating continent.

Until now, no one knows if they are a living thing or just an agglomeration of mist. Due to that mist-like appearance, us humans refer to them as 'Yuugenshu'.

zzz... zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...... zzzzzz......

The grotesque monster pounced towards us.

Oe/ Dia =U xeph cley, Di shela teo phes kaon
<■ ■, ■ ...... ■ ■, ■ ■ ■ , ...... ■ ...... ■ ■>

A strange sound rang through the meadows, a sound that makes one associate it with the word 'curse'.

The purple mist surrounding the Yuugenshu gave off light like an amethyst. Not long after, these light gradually turned into rays thinner than strands of hair.


Decay, venom, coma and mental destruction. It's a wave of curse that embodies all negative effects.

"Monica, erect the barriers, quick!"

One of my teammates called out my name, and I finally snapped back to reality.

...... I was distracted due to my nervousness.


The rays wove themselves into a complicated spiral-shaped image, and the concentric circles were expanding outward. Just as it was about to engulf me, I sang a short verse of the prayers.

Sia Sec elis arc...... Is io Miel
<I hope to dream once again, the dreams of that day......>

A shinryoku barrier constructed using the special language of the Priestesses.

A power that can permeates miracles throughout the world, and is thus named as 'shinryoku'. It is a wave that appears as someone is praying, which can create all sorts of miracles - the source of energy of the barrier.

The transparent blue light expanded, as though it was blessing everyone—

But it was still too late.

The mateki of Yuugenshu was quicker, and struck onto us.

At that instance, the training ended.

"Time's up. Mock scenario #03 [Anti-Mateki training] ends right here."

"Results of damage caused by mateki - all members are dead, including apprentice-Priestess Monica. This constitutes as a 'fail'. Please submit your reports within three days."

A mechanical voice reported the results with a calm voice.

All that happened within an instant...... And it ended up as a failure, before I could do anything.

"Uh...... Urm...... I am really sorry!"

I apologized quickly to the three people who was smiling bitterly in front of me.

"Well, everyone's bound to fail some times, so don't take it to heart. Just reflect on it, and make sure it don't happen again."

The captain nudged the barrel of his machine gun onto the Yuugenshu with a *klang*.

Or more specifically, a mechanical dummy replicating the looks of a Yuugenshu. It's the same for the mateki - it was harmless rays of light created with the ingenious use of mist and black light.

"But Monica, should that be an actual battle, we would all be annihilated by the mateki of Yuugenshu already. Since you are an apprentice-Priestess, you should be able to handle the mateki of Yuugenshu."

"............ Right."

"It will be fine if you understand that. Alright, it's about time I go to sleep."

Everyone returned to their own rooms after the training. As for me, I ran out of the first floor of Tenketsu Palace <Sophia>, into the training grounds by myself.

It was late night, and most guards and apprentice-Priestesses of Tenketsu Palace <Sophia> should be sound asleep by then. Silently going to the training grounds in the middle of the night had already became something that I must do every single day.

"...... Is he here today as well?"

I secretly peeked out from the huge tree next to the training grounds—


Two silver slashes of the swords cleaved through the dark.

...... There!

He was a guard wielding dual swords. A teenage boy with tea-red hair, wearing a black ceremonial clothing. His slim, slender frame of a teenage boy was coupled with a slightly childlike and androgynous face. He was probably as old as me - somewhere around fifteen or sixteen? Or perhaps even younger.

What shocked me was the incredibly impressive swordplay of his.

One, two, three and four strikes. He swung his swords gracefully, with a smooth flow of actions. I could not follow his speedy movements with my eyes, despite watching from a distance away.

There was not a single pause. The affluent streaks of his swords had no hesitation in them.


I could not pry my eyes away from that scene for a long, long time.

It was not due to the remarkable swordplay of his. He silently swung his dual swords daily - in the middle of the night when everyone else was still in their slumber, and during early mornings before everyone was awake. It was that hardworking attitude of his which attracted me deeply.

"...... I will have to work harder too."

As I looked on, it felt like I had gained the courage to do so.

That teenage boy must have put in a great deal of time and effort, to possess such exceptional abilities. That could not be any more clearer, after witnessing his training with my very own eyes.

I will have to work harder, so as not to fall behind.

I'll work harder and harder, and then...... Some day, I will become a true Priestess.

I gave a huge nod, and turned my back towards him.

The teenage boy was still behind me swinging his swords. He will definitely continue training even after I left.

...... If...... If I can become a Priestess.

...... At then, I hope my personal guardian will be—

I left the scene as I hid that small thought of mine deep down into my heart.

However, the dream of that day will never be fulfilled.

The teenage boy whom I admired died while on a mission, by falling off the floating continent into Garden of Corrupted Song <Eden>.

...... I heard about the news only after several weeks from that day.


  1. Awesome. Welcome back.

  2. Gambatte! Can't wait for next chapter

  3. Everyone shouting Japanese, I'm so proud. :P

    I was trying to figure out what would the author do to spice up the story, I guess I found out. :P

    Sou, okaerinasai mina-san, kono hon wo totemo omoshiroi darou. Ganbatte kudasai. :P

    BTW, I have no idea if what I just wrote is right. :P
    Any mistakes please correct me. :P
    Only the Japanese ones, I'm fine with the english ones. :P

    1. It's so ancient, but I'm reading through these right now, so I might as well point it out...

      この本は. The book is the subject, not the object. You could use it as the object if you told them to enjoy the book (この本を楽しんでください).

  4. domo arigatou zgmfx09a!
    *whistle*, ho ho ho~ I smell a secret admirer, and a possible love triangle here >:)

    @Keito man, you like to put :p in the end of every sentence you type

  5. @Shiroyuki

    Not every sentence, just when I say something stupid.
    That's why there is a lot of them. :P


    And regarding the love triangle, I don't know how you see it, but I don't think anyone would be able to beat Ymi when it comes to Sheltis.

  6. Can't wait for the next chapter!

  7. Man, you are very efficient/quick (unlike the lazy me): you have already finished your report and started the new novel.

    Anyways, looking forward to the rest of the novel. :)

  8. Guys, is there a PDF version of the Volume 1?

  9. @Nahuel Robledo

  10. @Keito
    That's the Onii-Ai's Volume 1.
    I meaned the Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden v1 xD

  11. @Nahuel

    Seems like I made a little mix up. :P

    I haven't seen a Kyoukai PDF. If anyone happened to make one, feel free to post.

  12. MOOOOAAARRRRR! Need moar!!!

    Actually when you first start working on this book, I really wasn't all too interested. Luckily, just the other day I was extremely bored at work and started reading some more. Although I have to admit there are some bad cliches and melodrama sprinkled about in there, I did warm up to it regardless. Thanks for the hard work.

  13. Thanks! This novel is awesome! Waiting for the next chapter!