tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786796147404413084.post7244482195326819325..comments2024-01-23T02:11:50.932+08:00Comments on C.E. Light Novel Translations: [Piano v2] Chapter 6: So As Not To Wake Up From the Dreamzgmfx09ahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16118153566717115367noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786796147404413084.post-78089660508818875792012-03-13T07:26:32.030+08:002012-03-13T07:26:32.030+08:00That moment, that very moment, when he said that, ...That moment, that very moment, when he said that, my one thought was:<br />Hadouken, Kamehameha, Fus ro dah, Falcon punch, Exodia, Genkidama, Super saiyan 4.<br />All that combined.<br /><br />I mean, when I was a kid I thought the only reason I couldn't a Kamehameha was because I wasn't trying hard enough, well, if i saw that happening in RL you would see energy balls flying everywhere.<br /><br /><br />That being sad, that was needed, something to spice thing up, but I actually thought it would be the Osananajimi move, but again, it woudln't be as interesting, due to Senpai's personality and her relationship with Mafu-chan, please agree, is way more interesting.<br /><br />I should say, if i were in his position, I'm not sure what I would do, I mean, I would know Mafuyu liked me because, well, I'm Brazilian, is our nature. But anyway, I know Mafuyu like me, but I wouldn't have made a move on her, that puts me exactly where Nao is, and, is not a very pleasant decision.<br />I understand poor Nao even though I desire to use my new-found saiyan powers to destroy him.Keitohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03563709195216382063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786796147404413084.post-88710657284256862392012-03-05T04:12:49.132+08:002012-03-05T04:12:49.132+08:00thanks for the chapter!
also i noticed that i enjo...thanks for the chapter!<br />also i noticed that i enjoy reading the comments as much as i enjoy reading the chapterSkyBoarderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16333567156620845339noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786796147404413084.post-74115419999924232372012-03-04T09:20:31.816+08:002012-03-04T09:20:31.816+08:00Even then, you would think he would make the conne...Even then, you would think he would make the connection between something he said or did and their behavior suddenly changing. I swear most protagonists are either slightly autistic or slightly sociopathic.<br /><br />"Hmm... I said something, and her mood instantly changed to visibly depressed... NAW CAN'T SEE A CONNECTION KTHXBYE LEAVING NOW! :D "<br />*headdesks*Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786796147404413084.post-30910760545409672682012-03-04T06:13:08.742+08:002012-03-04T06:13:08.742+08:00I fixed the first 3, the 4th one was fine but I re...I fixed the first 3, the 4th one was fine but I reworded it and the last one seems okay to me. Hopefully people are ok with my changes but they can be changed if needed by nek0 or the other editors. Thanks for the input.Yebanishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01729670573501420626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786796147404413084.post-24277372154326491352012-03-04T05:42:57.890+08:002012-03-04T05:42:57.890+08:00Uh, well I didn't reread everything but these ...Uh, well I didn't reread everything but these are the lines that stood out for now, up to the end of the swimming:<br /><br />"I crawled my way out from beneath Mafuyu and Chiaki's bodies, and immediately distance myself away from all of them to take a breather."<br /><br />"I don't remember Chiaki being that well-developed in the chest last I remember, so when did they—"<br /><br />"So you've even gave it a name huh......"<br /><br />"and helped maintain the balance"<br /><br />"I dared not face her at all"<br /><br />I'm not exactly sure, but I thing those are wrong in some way, not only tenses.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786796147404413084.post-88601769962867624362012-03-03T20:12:28.618+08:002012-03-03T20:12:28.618+08:00nice readnice readAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786796147404413084.post-26195923973305149712012-03-03T11:38:01.373+08:002012-03-03T11:38:01.373+08:00The "...... You mean...... Mafuyu?" line...The "...... You mean...... Mafuyu?" line made me want to hit the main character, but thanks for the chapter. Man, is there band a mess of emotionally unstable peopleAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786796147404413084.post-81670879407802607592012-03-03T10:38:08.174+08:002012-03-03T10:38:08.174+08:00Thanks for the translation, hohoho, things are sta...Thanks for the translation, hohoho, things are starting to get interesting, although I do feel bad for Mafuyu, i guess the follow chapters are about Nao trying to make up with her, im really hoping for more :)Aldo Lezamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09073937876857079381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786796147404413084.post-6144242937948768222012-03-03T09:42:46.113+08:002012-03-03T09:42:46.113+08:00Oh, that's the best thing I've seen in thi...Oh, that's the best thing I've seen in this blog...<br /><br />The one with the most sense, I'd say...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786796147404413084.post-26198540441653658862012-03-03T05:34:31.384+08:002012-03-03T05:34:31.384+08:00The plot is getting better and better, thanks for ...The plot is getting better and better, thanks for your job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786796147404413084.post-40655664024251565802012-03-03T04:43:17.354+08:002012-03-03T04:43:17.354+08:00Can you point some out so I can check them?Can you point some out so I can check them?Yebanishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01729670573501420626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786796147404413084.post-55089881127296746922012-03-03T04:37:36.681+08:002012-03-03T04:37:36.681+08:00Ah, well, what I noticed the most were wrong tense...Ah, well, what I noticed the most were wrong tenses. I know it's hard, having a hard time learning them as well, but I noticed them more in this chapter than in the previous ones.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786796147404413084.post-73761141897434197792012-03-03T03:14:55.306+08:002012-03-03T03:14:55.306+08:00Oops. Darned autocorrect changed Nao to Naomi and ...Oops. Darned autocorrect changed Nao to Naomi and Mao!Zensunninoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786796147404413084.post-72751213125527383632012-03-03T03:11:54.737+08:002012-03-03T03:11:54.737+08:00I don't really think Sempai was "making a...I don't really think Sempai was "making a move" on Naomi, at least not in any seriously romantic sense. It's more likely that she was a) getting it through his thick scull that it is Mao that she considers her McArtney, not Mafuyu; b) teasing his dense, boyish heart; and c) trying to get a reaction from Mafuyu so his denseness might actually figure out that this amazing, beautiful, talented, shy, abrasive, and vulnerable young lady has it bad for his clueless self!<br /><br />I expect he won't "get it" until about the end of the third novel, at which point he'll have to move heaven and earth in order to win her back after she gives up on his dense @ss!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786796147404413084.post-17558990565290123512012-03-03T03:07:48.358+08:002012-03-03T03:07:48.358+08:00too dense..
that was just to dense...
but if me w...too dense..<br />that was just to dense...<br /><br />but if me who has a bit of inferiority complex, in the position of Nao I will not dare to assume that someone as cute as talented as Mafuyu would had a feeling for me...<br /><br />and again thanks for the translation.Sakurai Evsahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07941127762539207504noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786796147404413084.post-42684963880576571322012-03-03T02:27:47.727+08:002012-03-03T02:27:47.727+08:00Just to note, I gave up on changing some of the li...Just to note, I gave up on changing some of the lines to "modern American" English because technically they weren't grammatically incorrect. If you meant just typos and other things, then I probably overlooked them as I went over this one in a hurry.DrkMercenaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06183539257474116137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786796147404413084.post-81580935186180511392012-03-03T01:32:36.611+08:002012-03-03T01:32:36.611+08:00They did, but it's a really lengthy chapter.
...They did, but it's a really lengthy chapter.<br /><br />I've looked through it and fixed some of the things that I found weird. If there's any other other issues left, please send me a mail with the awkward lines and I'll look into it.zgmfx09ahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16118153566717115367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786796147404413084.post-39464446648711221932012-03-03T01:12:26.666+08:002012-03-03T01:12:26.666+08:00I'm soooooo glad I wasn't the only one. If...I'm soooooo glad I wasn't the only one. If he was real I would have Gibbs slapped him so hard his face would've broke the table.Fallton13https://www.blogger.com/profile/13266225072669201036noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786796147404413084.post-15468263088106468642012-03-03T01:11:01.829+08:002012-03-03T01:11:01.829+08:00Awesome chapter. Thanks again.
Poor Mafu (T_T). ...Awesome chapter. Thanks again. <br /><br />Poor Mafu (T_T). From that angle it would've easily looked like her crush was getting kissed by senpai. I'm going to make an official declaration after reading this chap. Nao is way more dense than Orimura Ichika. At least Ichika can catch the hint he's being hit on from time to time. <br /><br />Can't wait for more. I've got a feeling that the next few chaps will be about making up with Mafu though, but that's ok. If they even finally come together, they'll make a great team/couple.<br /><br />And lastly, I was a bit saddened to find out that the series is only 5 volumes long. But I guess with this plot/story, it can't go on forever. But my hopes are high after seeing the cover of Volume 5. So again, thanks for the TL and looking forward to more Mafu and Nao.Fallton13https://www.blogger.com/profile/13266225072669201036noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786796147404413084.post-81642071963000061612012-03-03T00:32:01.447+08:002012-03-03T00:32:01.447+08:00"Mmm, that's right. I think I have alread..."Mmm, that's right. I think I have already found the Paul McCartney that belongs only to me."<br /><br /> The person standing next to Senpai......<br /><br /> "...... You mean...... Mafuyu?"<br /><br /><br /><br />I facepalmed so hard that my face and palm fused togetherAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786796147404413084.post-42936180584638429272012-03-02T23:50:49.664+08:002012-03-02T23:50:49.664+08:00While i was reading the line, "Paul something...While i was reading the line, "Paul something someting" from senpai, i was thinking to myself that i should find my own "Paul". Until i realized that it works for girls, "Paul" was a guy!, ya that was stupid of me. <br /><br />Nao shouldve make a move on Mafu-Mafu during swimming, it was that easy yet he didnt do it. Is that the only swimming scene in the chapter? Pretty short =x. <br /><br />Then again, thanks for the chapter~Winghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11481201187303784651noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786796147404413084.post-46996547169275766132012-03-02T23:39:11.199+08:002012-03-02T23:39:11.199+08:00Hey, thanks for the translation!
Quick question, i...Hey, thanks for the translation!<br />Quick question, is that friend of you still editing the chapters?<br />Unlike chapter 5, this one felt a little awkward to read at places, so I'm just wondering, since I plan to turn it into e-books, if you don't mind.<br />Oh, and I'm not trying to complain.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786796147404413084.post-89198089053158511812012-03-02T20:16:56.025+08:002012-03-02T20:16:56.025+08:00Ah... Senpai is much more straightforward than I t...Ah... Senpai is much more straightforward than I thought she was (I was actually hoping she really was lesbian, that would've been a nice change).<br />I mean, she made a move on Nao even while knowing about Chiaki's feelings (since she told her how dense he is), and she most likely understands Mafuyu, too. I wonder if she knew that Mafuyu was there? She should've been able to see her from her position.<br /><br />Anyway, thanks a lot for the translation, I hope Nao doesn't screw around too much now and catches on quickly.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786796147404413084.post-36659586218128600182012-03-02T16:39:16.098+08:002012-03-02T16:39:16.098+08:00Fantastic chapter. I love the little references t...Fantastic chapter. I love the little references to the story being in the past from the narrator's point of view. Itreally is a nice narrative touch.<br /><br />Thanks for the quick translation! Can't wait for the next chapter!Zensunninoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786796147404413084.post-53473508958667728182012-03-02T15:43:15.650+08:002012-03-02T15:43:15.650+08:00wow the translation is getting back to it usual ho...wow the translation is getting back to it usual honor! Sugoi!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com